In this page I will be showing the examples I gave in my self-reflection essays with pictures!

#1)  In these pictures, I edited a peers findings essay.  I was able to point out her mistakes, her biases and give her feedback.

#2)  In these pictures, my peers as well as my professor gave me feedback on my observation and interview essays. 

 

#3) In the following pictures one can see why drafting is so important.  These pictures show the mistakes I made in my first draft of my research proposal, which I thought was great.  

 

#4)  In the following picture one can tell that my biases were showing in my observation essay because I was ranting and my professor pointed it out.  (I did fix it for my final draft).

#5)  In the following two pictures one can see how I struggled with summarizing and repeating myself throughout various essays.